I really enjoyed Camp this Year.
Because It was a great experience.
The thing I want to get better at is using multimedia on my blog
because I don't use them much on my blog.
I liked being in a Digi class
because it is something different to being in a normal class with pen and paper.
This is my reflection for the end of the year.
Wednesday, 19 December 2012
The last day of the Year
Thursday, 13 December 2012
Sock Puppets year five day out
Year 5 Day Out by Rhys, Joshua & Sam from Kieren Moriarty on Vimeo.
This is our year five day out reflection that Joshua, Samuel Halford and Me (Rhys) created on the I pad. We created this on an app on the I pad called Sock Puppets.
Wednesday, 12 December 2012
My Cat Art
This is my cat art. This is the art that the class is doing. We got the inspiration from the famous artist Paul Klee.
Monday, 10 December 2012
Wonder
This is My poster I made about wonder |
Friday, 23 November 2012
The Five Powerful Captains
Once there was five adventures their names were Rhys, Daniel Stefan, Seth, Jacob. They went on so many adventurers that they made up nicknames for themselves. Rhys made up Captain America and he could see far, far away, Daniel Captain Underpants, Stefan was Captain Ukba, Seth was Captain Jack Sparrow and Jacob was Captain Chubaka. They all had super powers Rhys was unable to be killed, Daniel could fly and Stefan was bomb proof and bullet proof , Seth was Captain Jack Sparrow able to summon lightning, Jacob was Captain Chubaka and he was able to make people really hairy.
Then one day when they went on an adventure they were challenged for their ship but they said “NO JUST GO AWAY!” said Captain Jack Sparrow
“What island are we going to now” Said Captain America
“Maybe Candy Island” Said Captain Underpants
“But Candy Island is not real” said Captain Ukba
“Yes it is But Candy Island hasn’t been found in 200 years” Said Captain Chubaka
“Oh come on mate lets just try it might be easy to find but it might take all of our lives and it might take a few months or even a few years but its worth it” Said Captain America
So they went on there journey to find candy island Then
“Hey what is that it looks like an island lets check it out. It looks like Candy Island. FULL STEAM AHEAD!!” said Captain America
But when They got there it had a big sign saying If you are going to candy island go that way So they Went that way. But What they didn’t know was that it wasn't Candy island that they had found it was Death Island.
“Hey what about if we just sleep here for the night and have a try in the morning sun it would be easier for you to see the island then we would get some candy to eat”said Captain
The Next Day They went to the ship and then Captain America had a look around to see if he could see the Island but it was nowhere to be seen.
“Ok guys lets carry on with the journey so we we can get to where we want to go”
So that day they carried on with the journey
A few days later
“Ok guys lets carry on with the journey so we we can get to where we want to go.”
The same thing happened they went on and on to go and find their destination. Then in the middle of the day they found another island and then when they went closer to the island it looked like there was blue hills and pink shores with lollipops and lollies and hills covered in lollies. And when they got there they had a look at it and there it was Candy Island the island they have been looking for it. It has been years since they have never found an island that had been so nice they would normally been made out of dirt, mud and lots of yucky stuff.
This is a story that I wrote it is about the five of us going on and adventure to Candy Island. Candy island is a island on an TV show called The Adventures Of Flap Jack.
Thursday, 25 October 2012
My trip to Nelson
On Friday a few weeks ago at 8 o'clock in the morning I went to Wellington and stayed there for one night. Then at 5 o'clock Saturday morning 10 of us had to wake up and then at 6 o'clock we went in a van to go to the Blue Bridge Terminal to get on the ferry that was leaving at eight in the morning. When we got there it was time to get some thing to eat. On Saturday we went to McDonald's and then we went to racing in a chiller. When we got there we saw no one there so we waited for the people to get there.
After the first rounds of racing I got into the b main. The b main is the 2nd best group. At the end of the b main finals I got 14th out of 20 cars. There were 58 people that were racing and there were 12 people that are from the North Island that were down there.
Friday, 28 September 2012
My First letter to my pen pal in U.S.A
This is my kiwi off my letter that I wrote to my pen pal. It has this drawing of a kiwi. I did it is hand written. I got to chose my pen pal because I didn't have my name written on the list of people in the class in America.
Friday, 21 September 2012
The Bittern
These are the questions we have been doing. They are about the book |
1. Because the bird would of been getting food from there
2. Because it says they were running around like headless chickens
3. Because grandad didn’t drain out his swamp and many animals could live there
4. I think they might feel a bit angry because the farmers would've wanted to raise animals there.
5.Good because the bittern might of been getting food from the swamp
This is the reading task we had to do for the book we have it is called the bittern it is about the a bird called the bittern going to granddads swamp because granddad is not draining his swamp out.
Wednesday, 5 September 2012
Production Diary Part 3
23/8/12
Dear Diary Today we painted our big mastercard its for the end of our advert and Tyrin bought his fake mastercard and then we made some masks for the all blacks to have they were Sonny Bill, Ma'a Nonu, Danny C and Richie Mccaw.
This is my production diary part two I has what we did and what mask we have printed out. We have added Sonny Bill for one of the All Blacks.
This is a photo of all of the All Blacks They are Danny, Ma'a Nonu, Richie and Sonny Bill.
Dear Diary Today we painted our big mastercard its for the end of our advert and Tyrin bought his fake mastercard and then we made some masks for the all blacks to have they were Sonny Bill, Ma'a Nonu, Danny C and Richie Mccaw.
This is a photo of all of the All Blacks They are Danny, Ma'a Nonu, Richie and Sonny Bill.
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Friday, 31 August 2012
Production diary part 2
22/8/12
Dear Diary Today we have practiced and sorted out the props and things that we had to bring from home. I have to bring fancy cloths like black pants and a long black fancy shirt because I am the butler. It is an easy part I only have to say “How can I help you sir?” Its easy to remember Its just that I need to speak up. When I went on stage I felt a bit nervous for the first time.
This is my part two of my production diary I have got a photo from div share it is Me and Tyrin on the stage.
Dear Diary Today we have practiced and sorted out the props and things that we had to bring from home. I have to bring fancy cloths like black pants and a long black fancy shirt because I am the butler. It is an easy part I only have to say “How can I help you sir?” Its easy to remember Its just that I need to speak up. When I went on stage I felt a bit nervous for the first time.
This is my part two of my production diary I have got a photo from div share it is Me and Tyrin on the stage.
Thursday, 30 August 2012
Production diary part 1
21/08/12
Dear Diary today we were in room 19 finding out what part of the production we are and my name had just been called out and I am in the advert part of the production and we have finished day one of it and we know the advert we are doing. My group is me, Brodie, Kayden, Sam, Tyrin and Jake. Were doing the All Blacks master card Ad Its pretty easy but it is also a bit hard to remember the lines.
During this week team five have been practicing our production and the class has been writing a production diary.
Dear Diary today we were in room 19 finding out what part of the production we are and my name had just been called out and I am in the advert part of the production and we have finished day one of it and we know the advert we are doing. My group is me, Brodie, Kayden, Sam, Tyrin and Jake. Were doing the All Blacks master card Ad Its pretty easy but it is also a bit hard to remember the lines.
During this week team five have been practicing our production and the class has been writing a production diary.
Friday, 24 August 2012
Olympic Greek Vase
This is my Greek vase it is about Usain Bolt running to the finish with the batten. He blasts them all off with his speed and Jamaica wins the relay |
This is my QR code it is the story of my art scan it with a i pad Or smart phone to listen to it . |
Wednesday, 1 August 2012
My How am I learning Refection
Some things that are different about this year are having a computer and sharing things to my learning buddy and them sharing something with me too.
Having a computer and Google account has helped me learn new things and help my friends fix up their work if they need help.
I like having a blog because I can share things with the world and the class.
I share my learning by putting my work on my blog and by being confident and doing new things.
I help others by helping them when they want someone to help I help them.
I use ICT to help my learning in reading, writing and maths in a document because I can do lots of things like inserting a graph for maths.
I get feedback for my learning from Mr M and the class and They give me feedback by when I comment on their blogs then they will comment on my blog This makes me feel happy that they are commenting on my blog
Things I am really proud of achieving in Room 20 is getting to write on a document.
I am learning faster by recording my voice in an reflection it helps me get more confident by saying something like a reflection of what we have done in front of an audience.
The class did some reflections about How we are learning. They are about our learning
Tuesday, 31 July 2012
Friday, 27 July 2012
The worst day for being a cat
One day I was eating my breakfast when I saw a little fluff ball. This is my story...
Hey what's that over there? Is it a fluff ball? There, it's a one eyed thing. The thing is doing the moonwalk to the blasting music.
Don’t disturb me! I’m eating my food. Don’t run away. I want to play with you!
He runs around and around the spotty mat and disappears in one of the dots. I can’t find him he is gone. Pop! He pops out of one of the dots, he is really fast. I can barely see him. Meow don’t change the song they are cool songs. He’s changing the music on the stereo. Come back here now otherwise I will stop playing and go sit on my bed and be lazy. Ahh!! I fell off a chair and landed on the floor. Then I went and jumped off the couch and hurt my leg.
Then the girl came and picked me up. That was when she started talking to me like I was a baby. That was the worst day of my life.
This is my worst day of my life writing I got my inspiration from The great inspiration shed
Hey what's that over there? Is it a fluff ball? There, it's a one eyed thing. The thing is doing the moonwalk to the blasting music.
Don’t disturb me! I’m eating my food. Don’t run away. I want to play with you!
He runs around and around the spotty mat and disappears in one of the dots. I can’t find him he is gone. Pop! He pops out of one of the dots, he is really fast. I can barely see him. Meow don’t change the song they are cool songs. He’s changing the music on the stereo. Come back here now otherwise I will stop playing and go sit on my bed and be lazy. Ahh!! I fell off a chair and landed on the floor. Then I went and jumped off the couch and hurt my leg.
Then the girl came and picked me up. That was when she started talking to me like I was a baby. That was the worst day of my life.
This is my worst day of my life writing I got my inspiration from The great inspiration shed
Friday, 20 July 2012
Valerie Adams
This is what we had to do for our homework. We had to choose someone that was going to the Olympics in London. I choose Valerie Adams. She is a very good shot putter she is one of the best shot putters in the world.
Tuesday, 26 June 2012
Stuck in a Digi World
A long long time ago in a digi world there was a guy. His name was Steve. He was building his house when some zombies, creepers and slime started chasing him. SMACK! He hits one on the head. The sun starts coming up and the zombies, creepers and slime start to run away.
“Rhys, Seth, Josh, Stefan, get your swords and come help fight the zombies, creepers and slime. They are chasing me. Help me. Fight them off!” said Steve. SMACK! BANG! CRASH! All of the zombies and other things die and catch on fire. “Now I can finish our house,” said Steve.
Rhys, Seth, Josh, Stefan run off to find some gold and diamonds to make some pickaxes and axes for getting iron and cobble stone to build their sheds for weapons. “Look over here! It’s gold! We're rich, we're rich!” exclaimed Stefan.
Oh, my name’s Steve. Sorry not to introduce myself earlier on. I have some dumb mates called Rhys, Seth, Josh and Stefan. They are my slaves for the rest of their lives. This is how it all started. Well, one day I started a challenge. Then they came along and challenged me and lost. Then they became my slaves. That day on I punished them and said go get me some gold and make me rich. That was how it all started.
This is my Stuck in a Digi world writing. It is based on Minecraft. Minecraft is a game on the Xbox and computer. It is a game where you can build houses and other things like pools and big book or TV characters if you wanted.
These pictures are from Samuel. Here is his blog link
Wednesday, 20 June 2012
Letter to V.M Jones
Dear V.M Jones,
Hi my name is Rhys, I thought your book was amazing. It is the best books I’ve read. One of my favorite subjects at school is writing as well as art.
Room 20 have just finished your book and we were reading the notes and your authors note. In your note it said you have been to many schools in New Zealand and we hope you can come to our school some time.
Your book was AWESOME!! I like the part when Josh went back to get his brother in the triathlon in the chapter, The end of the race. I really enjoyed the part where we got to meet Buddy.
My favourite character was Josh because he was determined to keep on going in the
triathlon
Hopefully you can write more books for us to read.
Thanks Rhys
year 5 Parkvale School
Hastings
Hi my name is Rhys, I thought your book was amazing. It is the best books I’ve read. One of my favorite subjects at school is writing as well as art.
Room 20 have just finished your book and we were reading the notes and your authors note. In your note it said you have been to many schools in New Zealand and we hope you can come to our school some time.
Your book was AWESOME!! I like the part when Josh went back to get his brother in the triathlon in the chapter, The end of the race. I really enjoyed the part where we got to meet Buddy.
My favourite character was Josh because he was determined to keep on going in the
triathlon
Hopefully you can write more books for us to read.
Thanks Rhys
year 5 Parkvale School
Hastings
This is my letter to V.M Jones it is to the author of buddy. Buddy is the book room 20 has been reading for the last few weeks and we have just finished reading it.
Monday, 18 June 2012
Interview Reflection
Reading
My favourite in Reading has been Buddy by VM Jones.My next step is to read bigger books
and to try get into another group.
Writing
This is my favourite writing (http://priderhys.blogspot.co.nz)list poem
I am Proud of is my list poem(http://priderhys.blogspot.co.nz list poem)
I have learnt where to put full stops and other punctuation things in the right places
My next step is to write faster.
I like my blog because I can put my docs on it and all my writing things.
This is my favourite post (http://priderhys.blogspot.co.nz rubbish post) because it is about the environment and our topic
I like commenting on blogs because when I comment on people's blog they put a comment on one of my posts.
This is my favourite comment on my blog is this comment (http://priderhys.blogspot.co.nz parris comment)
Maths
This is my favourite maths: learning fractions with my group.
I am proud of learning my five times and most of my five division facts.
I have learnt new strategies that I didn’t know of.
- New fractions that I couldn’t read before.
Something I find challenging is halving big numbers.
My next step is to get up to Stage six rocket and get in to the marios
Art
This is my favourite art (http://priderhys.blogspot.co.nz) Because it is made from one shape and I didn’t know how to do art like that.
Topic
Something I have liked in our topic learning is learning about rubbish and the pacific trash vortex
P.E. / Fitness
What I like about this is playing and learning new games and skills (link)
I like playing these games:
- corner ball
- netball
Fitness helps me learn more skills
Something I liked about my interview was that I got to read my reflection to my mum.
http://www.tagxedo.com/app.html
This is my reflection from my interveiw
Friday, 15 June 2012
My fraction reflection
Reflection for Fractions·
Something I was pleased with was learning new fractions and getting to say them properly
because some of the fractions I knew I couldn’t say properly
Something I want to get better at is other fractions I can’t say
Something I was pleased with was learning new fractions and getting to say them properly
because some of the fractions I knew I couldn’t say properly
· I really enjoyed learning fractions on our washing line
because it was all new to me
· Something I found hard was saying 1/6 and 1/10
(What can I do about it?practice saying them at home )
This is my reflection for maths
This is my reflection for maths
Wednesday, 13 June 2012
Our Rubbish Bin
This is a pie graph it shows the percentage of things we had in our bin.
This is what was in our bin in one day it had heaps of plastic and not much food scraps it had four bits of cardboard. We had no bits of paper in our bin because at school we have a paper bin
Sunday, 27 May 2012
My list poem
This is my recording of my list poem I have put the poem underneath.
Maths gear
All lonely and cold
Chairs
Scattered around the classroom
Heater
Humming away
Netbook keyboard
Typing away tap tap tap
Leaf poems
Hanging from a tree
Books
Waiting to be read
Girls
Bossy all the time
Sun
shinning through the window
Lights
Hanging, waiting to be turned on
Posters
Stiff and unbendable
Jungle mural
All covered in animals
Fake monkeys standing in a coconut treesleaves
Rattling away in the wind
Projector
Buzzing away in the class
Fish
Swimming in the tank looking for food in the tiny stones
Boxes
Hanging from the ceiling
This is the poem I wrote it is about what is around me and what is in our class.
Thursday, 24 May 2012
Our environment poem
This is me and Sam's Fotobabble I have put the link, it is the purple word.
It is about the environment
Wednesday, 16 May 2012
My Story bird
leopard claws on Storybird
I have made a story bird it is called Leopard Claws. Here is the link story bird.
I created this story bird, please check it out.
I have made a story bird it is called Leopard Claws. Here is the link story bird.
I created this story bird, please check it out.
Thursday, 10 May 2012
My poem
Autumn Leaves
The leaves are falling
covering all of the nice green grass.
The Wind blows
all the curved leaves off the tree
landing on the green grass
making the grass crumbly and
colourful red, green, yellow and brown.
The sun bolted on to the nearly bare tree
leaving a trail
of crispy leaves.
Rhys Tamanui 9 Years
WALT: observe and include specific details in our writing
SUCCESS CRITERIA
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SELF ASSESSMENT
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Includes four nouns (from observation)
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Leaf wind trees sun
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Made the nouns do something
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:)
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Started each new description on a new line
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:)
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Extended each line so it makes more sense
(may include a who, where, why, what, when).
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This is my poem it has a vacaroo under it
Voice Recorder >>
This is my vocaroo
This is my leaf it has a few holes and some veins. |
This is the tree it fell from I Found the leaf under it. |
Monday, 7 May 2012
My Reading Timeline
This is my Timeline. It is my reading one. It is simple, all you do is click add a event. Once you create a timeline and a timeline account.
Thursday, 26 April 2012
My Finished 3D box
These are my photos of my 3D box. It has 3 different PRIDE letters on it. It has E for Enjoyment, D for Determination and R for Respect.
Sunday, 8 April 2012
Archery
Reflection for camp
…because…I’ve never shot one
· Something I was pleased with was… That I could shoot a bow and arrow.
…because…I’ve never shot one
· I really enjoyed learning about how bow and arrows worked and how to use them.
…because…when I first saw them they looked like they were hard to use and they were
· Something I found hard was aiming.
· Something that made me think was when he told us about the old bow and arrow and the new one
…because…they both looked the same.
· Something I want to get better at is aiming and shooting the target. The main thing was aiming.
White Water Rafting
RAFTING
To the first rapids the water splashes into me and Brodie's face then the water goes calm again and we started going slow. “Forward paddle” says the instructor his name was Dion. As the group start gaining speed “STOP.” Then we come into a corner aren't we lucky to go rafting. What's that smell it's probably trees in the forest and the wet moss.
“We've come to a shallow bit you can put your paddles on the ground if you want,” said the instructor. So the whole group did. Splash!! As my group put their paddles on the river bed, clatter clatter clatter as the paddles scrape on the ground.
“Go into the water if you want but hold the rope," says Dion. I jump in and still clinging on to the raft. We come to a corner, I'm still in the water. It is right by the cliff. Then I get pulled in, otherwise I would've hit it. Dion told us about the rock he named after him because when the Strikers hit it you had to hold on. Then we come around the corner “FORWARD PADDLE! We're coming to my rock!!” shouted Dion. We strike his rock and Brody goes flying out. “Now that was luck it wasn't me that had fell out.”
“Brody just hold your feet up!!” yelled Tyler's Dad Jordan. We get to the point where we can get Brody out, we reach over and pull him in. “Thanks.” said Brody.
“FORWARD PADDLE!!” yelled Dion. We paddle as fast as we can. SMACK we go fast into a rock. I almost fell out, I felt dizzy. “Here comes carnage corner go as fast as you want!” yelled Dion. We hit it. Carnage corner. I almost fall off there too “That was close,” I say to myself.
“It’s time we finished, lets float down the river,” said Dion. So we did. WE got to the end. “Come on guys let's pull our raft in and go for a swim” said Dion our instructor. I see the other rafts and the kayak.
“Lets go get in the bus” yelled one of the instructors. We get in the bus and drive back to camp.
THE END
By Rhys Tamanui
Back from camp. Had a good time hope you like my writing.
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