My poem

  Autumn Leaves

The leaves are falling

covering all of the nice green grass.

The Wind blows

all the curved leaves off the tree

landing on the green grass

making the grass crumbly and

colourful red, green, yellow and brown.

The sun bolted on to the nearly bare tree

leaving a trail

of crispy leaves.

Rhys Tamanui 9 Years

WALT: observe and include specific details in our writing SUCCESS CRITERIA	SELF ASSESSMENT
Includes four nouns (from observation)	Leaf wind trees sun
Made the nouns do something	:)
Started each new description on a new line	:)
Extended each line so it makes more sense (may include a who, where, why, what, when).	✓✓

This is my poem it has a vacaroo under it




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This is my vocaroo

This is my leaf it has a few holes and some veins. 

This is the tree it fell from I Found the leaf under it.