This is my recording of my list poem I have put the poem underneath.
Maths gear
All lonely and cold
Chairs
Scattered around the classroom
Heater
Humming away
Netbook keyboard
Typing away tap tap tap
Leaf poems
Hanging from a tree
Books
Waiting to be read
Girls
Bossy all the time
Sun
shinning through the window
Lights
Hanging, waiting to be turned on
Posters
Stiff and unbendable
Jungle mural
All covered in animals
Fake monkeys standing in a coconut treesleaves
Rattling away in the wind
Projector
Buzzing away in the class
Fish
Swimming in the tank looking for food in the tiny stones
Boxes
Hanging from the ceiling
This is the poem I wrote it is about what is around me and what is in our class.
Wow Rhys.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is great, you have a lot of strong verbs.
What is your favourite part about your poem?
Thanks Parris My faviorite part is Net book keyboard typing away tap tap tap
DeleteAwesome poem Rhys its so cool i love it.
ReplyDeleteI like your story Rhys! My favourite part was the net books.
ReplyDeleteI like your list poem.
ReplyDeleteIt very funny and creative.
wow I love you list poem it great
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