My Story bird

leopard claws on Storybird
I have made a story bird it is called Leopard Claws. Here is the link story bird.
I created this story bird, please check it out.

My poem

  Autumn Leaves

The leaves are falling

covering all of the nice green grass.

The Wind blows

all the curved leaves off the tree

landing on the green grass

making the grass crumbly and

colourful red, green, yellow and brown.

The sun bolted on to the nearly bare tree

leaving a trail

of crispy leaves.

Rhys Tamanui 9 Years

WALT: observe and include specific details in our writing SUCCESS CRITERIA	SELF ASSESSMENT
Includes four nouns (from observation)	Leaf wind trees sun
Made the nouns do something	:)
Started each new description on a new line	:)
Extended each line so it makes more sense (may include a who, where, why, what, when).	✓✓

This is my poem it has a vacaroo under it




Voice Recorder >>

This is my vocaroo

This is my leaf it has a few holes and some veins. 

This is the tree it fell from I Found the leaf under it.

My Reading Timeline

This is my Timeline. It is my reading one. It is simple, all you do is click add a event. Once you create a timeline and a timeline account.

My Map

This is my map it shows you how to get to Mountain Valley
It has the directions on the side of it.

My Finished 3D box

These are my photos of my 3D box. It has 3 different PRIDE letters on it. It has E for Enjoyment, D for Determination and R for Respect.

Archery

Reflection for camp

· Something I was pleased with was… That I could shoot a bow and arrow.

                            
…because…I’ve never shot one

· I really enjoyed learning about how bow and arrows worked and how to use them.

…because…when I first saw them they looked like they were hard to use and they were

· Something I found hard was aiming.

· Something that made me think was when he told us about the old bow and arrow and the new one

…because…they both looked the same.

· Something I want to get better at is aiming and shooting the target. The main thing was aiming.

White Water Rafting

            RAFTING

To the first rapids the water splashes into me and Brodie's face then the water goes calm again and we started going slow. “Forward paddle” says the instructor his name was Dion. As the group start gaining speed “STOP.” Then we come into a corner aren't we lucky to go rafting. What's that smell it's probably trees in the forest and the wet moss. 

“We've come to a shallow bit you can put your paddles on the ground if you want,” said the instructor. So the whole group did. Splash!! As my group put their paddles on the river bed, clatter clatter clatter as the paddles scrape on the ground. 

“Go into the water if you want but hold the rope," says Dion. I jump in and still clinging on to the raft. We come to a corner, I'm still in the water. It is right by the cliff. Then I get pulled in, otherwise I would've hit it. Dion told us about the rock he named after him because when the Strikers hit it you had to hold on. Then we come around the corner “FORWARD PADDLE! We're coming to my rock!!” shouted Dion. We strike his rock and Brody goes flying out. “Now that was luck it wasn't me that had fell out.” 

“Brody just hold your feet up!!” yelled  Tyler's Dad Jordan. We get to the point where we can get Brody out, we reach over and pull him in. “Thanks.” said Brody. 

“FORWARD PADDLE!!” yelled Dion. We paddle as fast as we can. SMACK we go fast into a rock. I almost fell out, I felt dizzy. “Here comes carnage corner go as fast as you want!” yelled Dion. We hit it. Carnage corner. I almost fall off there too “That was close,” I say to myself. 

“It’s time we finished, lets float down the river,” said Dion. So we did. WE got to the end. “Come on guys let's pull our raft in and go for a swim” said Dion our instructor. I see the other rafts and the kayak. 

“Lets go get in the bus” yelled one of the instructors. We get in the bus and drive back to camp.

                       THE END

                 By Rhys Tamanui

Back from camp. Had a good time hope you like my writing.