Sunday 27 May 2012

My list poem


This is my recording of my list poem I have put the poem underneath.




Maths gear
All lonely and cold
Chairs
Scattered around the classroom  
Heater
Humming away
Netbook keyboard
Typing away tap tap tap
Leaf poems
Hanging from a tree
Books
Waiting to be read
Girls
Bossy all the time
Sun
shinning through the window
Lights

Hanging, waiting to be turned on
Posters
Stiff and unbendable
Jungle mural
All covered in animals
Fake monkeys standing in a coconut trees
leaves
Rattling away in the wind
Projector
Buzzing away in the class
Fish
Swimming in the tank looking for food in the tiny stones
Boxes
Hanging from the ceiling 



This is the poem I wrote it is about what is around me and what is in our class.











Thursday 24 May 2012

Our environment poem




This is me and Sam's Fotobabble I have put the link, it is the purple word.
It is about the environment

Wednesday 16 May 2012

My Story bird

leopard claws on Storybird
I have made a story bird it is called Leopard Claws. Here is the link story bird.
I created this story bird, please check it out.

Thursday 10 May 2012

My poem



  Autumn Leaves


The leaves are falling
covering all of the nice green grass.
The Wind blows
all the curved leaves off the tree
landing on the green grass
making the grass crumbly and
colourful red, green, yellow and brown.

The sun bolted on to the nearly bare tree
leaving a trail
of crispy leaves.

Rhys Tamanui 9 Years

WALT: observe and include specific details in our writing
SUCCESS CRITERIA
SELF ASSESSMENT
Includes four nouns (from observation)
Leaf wind trees sun
Made the nouns do something
:)
Started each new description on a new line
:)
Extended each line so it makes more sense
(may include a who, where, why, what, when).              
✓✓


This is my poem it has a vacaroo under it




Voice Recorder >>

This is my vocaroo




This is my leaf it has a few holes and some veins. 

This is the tree it fell from I Found the leaf under it.

Monday 7 May 2012

My Reading Timeline





This is my Timeline. It is my reading one. It is simple, all you do is click add a event. Once you create a timeline and a timeline account.